Honest feedback: The beat was kinda cool from 0:10-0:22 but then it got way too busy. The first guy sounds like hes sucking on a jolly rancher while hes rapping, like a shitty dre dog at 6:00AM with the cocaine drips and a head cold. The other guy rapping shouldnt have been alternating lines with him, it sounded amatuerish. That being said, do your thing man, put some more work into it, but do your thing.