You need to work on this song a bit. Right now the beat is extra simple, I'd even say minimalistic. There's no hook. Basically there's nothing in this tracks that wouldn't make a listener stop it after a first verse.
This a intro song he just wanted to do I think its heat it ain't no album cut so you'll never get a hook on it but, I'll let em know what you send cuzz we except all criticism, keep it com'N !!!
Lil Evil