Been gone for a minute.....

  • Wanna Join? New users you can now register lightning fast using your Facebook or Twitter accounts.
Deuce

Deuce

Sicc OG
#1
Jun 12, 2002
1,637
0
0
40
#1
I noticed I ain't posted shit on this forum for a minute.........checc me out.


polishing my pistols and aligning them in position to hit u/
loading my glocks with hollow tips that rip through u like tissue/
no this aint ficticial, with the red beam i never miss you/
i know u was my nigga, but my team has been hired to diss u/
spit on u after u dead cause i got no remorse/
i wanted to make sure u were dead so i shot at ya corspe/
Mafia style,popped u then pulled off in a porsche/
picked ya body up zipped it and dropped u off at the morgue/
cause thats how i do, snipe u then i poppin ya crew/
i get paid for one hit, but once i start shooting i dont stop/
thats why im wanted for multiple murders and bustin up cops/
but when i see these siccness emcees i'm gonna spray one hundred bullets at them/
i know my aim is lethal so most likely it'll catch them/
i heard they was dissing me, fucking up plans/
so they put a hit on me for a truck full of grands/
y'all did me dirty and now i'm gonna respond with a bang/
fuck havin a shank,when u see me u gonna think it's a prank/
but when i flash the heat u gonna sit there and think/
whats the problem, what did i do to deserve this/
my boss said u raped his daughter on some perve shit/
so he told me to do his duty for he has gave up that life/
but not me, i just started and i'm trying to earn stripes/
i talked to christ and he told me that my souls on thin ice/
so rather i do this or not, i still wont see the light/
so i'll just see the price, hundreds of thousands, it's s struggle/
but it's major hustle thats way worth the pay and bundle/
and for the right price i might just body u/
put the shoty to you, and u betta get ready for out rendevous/
toss u in the river, they wont find the other part of you/
the heart of you, will be crushed but i dont give a fuck/
cause once i get paid to do my job, i just bust/
thats the cause and ya dead corpse is the effect/
my shoty will shoot u up like a dick that errects/
i do without vests, thats why they call me the "best of the best"/
fuck cardiac-arrest i shoot till theres a hole in ya chest

I notice y'all never feel my ''lyrical'' metapors on this forum so i cooled off with the big words n shit.
2 C's
 
M

MrDontGIVEaFUCK

Sicc OG
#3
Apr 25, 2002
3,650
3
0
37
#3
to be honest Deuce... i think you got talent juss look inside dawg... juss lay off the murder shit... its coo and all but you do too much. i think you got potential to be better on what you post.. stay with it and try to be more lyrical.. the murder is coo and all juss not ever line and shit....
 
Deuce

Deuce

Sicc OG
#4
Jun 12, 2002
1,637
0
0
40
#4
DeuceThatYungPimp

^^Homie if you checc my other posts I go lyrical on it .
Mayn now I'm really confused than a mothaufcca when I go lyrical it's naw anw thats wacc and then murderous which I thought most would feel and it's go lyrical.
Someone fill me in as to what the fucc people on the sicness feel.
Good lookin' on the feedbacc though
2 C's
 
M

MrDontGIVEaFUCK

Sicc OG
#5
Apr 25, 2002
3,650
3
0
37
#5
siccness has many styles.. some are into lyrical content, some like the "Big" words, some like love, some like real shit.. (that you can relate with) and that murderous shit is coo, but maybe 4 bars not a whole thing ya feel?.... post up another verse (lyrically) and i'll give you my honest thoughts....

holla
 
Deuce

Deuce

Sicc OG
#6
Jun 12, 2002
1,637
0
0
40
#6
DeuceThatYungPimp

Aight kinfolks,You said every day shit that people relate too well here's a lil freestyle promtin weed over drank...............tell me what you think.


Fuck a newport/
smoking puple haze will never lead me to taking a snort/
shit it ain't my fault mothafuccaz drunk driving landed they ass in court/
smoking is like a sport everybody into it/
but not drinking cause most niggas ain't into sippin toxic liquid/
the only harm smoking brings is turning your lips black/
on the other hand drinking will make you stumble and fall flat on your back/
drinking gets your mind all fucked up and to these lil girls you think u da mack/
before I ever drink an ice house i'll probably do crack/
getting high is like your lungs are on swoll/
but a DUI will get you 25-life without a chance of parole/
i'll smoke till my eyes is blood shot red/
but you'll drink and take shots straight to the head/
fucking your brain organs up dialating your pulpils leaving you dead/
got your main bitch screaming "somebody call a mead"/
but it's to late your soul already rest in satan's bed/
i'll smoke everything from an ounce to a brick/
that sex on the beach drink will get your mind fucked up that some kidnappers will snatch you up and you don't even know who ya wit/
spending all your time at the bar ain't got no time to handle your responsibilities and shit/
cigarettes are for red necks I smoke nothin but herb/
but that saint I's will land your drop top on the curb/
after 2 blunts i'm looking for the mouth n lips service girls hopin to get served/
shit when high niggas may act a lil crazy/
but atleast we don't go home and beat up on our old lady/
got everybody cryin including your 7th month old baby/
recking your family's 2000 mercedes/
after a good meal and a nap shit i'm alright/
but for you it's not that easy got you pissin and throwin up all night/
tell me why when ya'll drunk there always gotta be a fight/
so as I continue to get higher/
don't know what the fuck talkin about askin niggas for they oscar meyer/
a word of advice when you leave the bar make sure gotta designated driver/
without one you may hit a tree and set your hatchback on fire/


???? Not sayin' I don't drink Deuce an alcaholic but just to show flexibilty and a original style
2 C's
 
M

MrDontGIVEaFUCK

Sicc OG
#7
Apr 25, 2002
3,650
3
0
37
#7
to be honest homeboy. you got skills but expand ya vocabualry a lil , fix up the word play... it read nicely... juss rhyme with in a line..

EXAMPLE....

your way....
Deuce said:


Fuck a newport/
smoking puple haze will never lead me to taking a snort/
shit it ain't my fault mothafuccaz drunk driving landed they ass in court/
smoking is like a sport everybody into it/
but not drinking cause most niggas ain't into sippin toxic liquid/
the only harm smoking brings is turning your lips black/
on the other hand drinking will make you stumble and fall flat on your back/
drinking gets your mind all fucked up and to these lil girls you think u da mack/
2 C's
Click to expand...

My way...
Fuck a newport, Deuce is here blazin up your fort/
smoking puple haze, mind daze will never lead me to taking a snort/
Come up short,shit it ain't my fault mothafuccaz drunk driving landing they ass in court/
smoking is like a sport, an escort for our mind to relax/
Charge it to the game, never pay tax,always drinking cause most niggas ain't into sippin toxic liquid/
who did the only harm? smoking brings no hesitation/
on the other hand drinking will make you stumble and fall flat on your back without relaxation/


i dono.. juss shit liek that. (mine could be better) this juss aitn my style....

understand?
 
Deuce

Deuce

Sicc OG
#8
Jun 12, 2002
1,637
0
0
40
#8
DeuceThatYungPimp

Yeah I feel it to the fullest cuzzo but say,I don't wanna go to basic though you know? like cat,rat,sat,,fire,wire,hire style shit you know? it's just hard typin this shit without a audio.Vamps need to get a open mic section added to the siccness.
Good lookin' out on the response
2 C's
 
M

MrDontGIVEaFUCK

Sicc OG
#9
Apr 25, 2002
3,650
3
0
37
#9
all good dawg.. look at some of my flows. i am lyrical and dont use those basic words.... i do soemtimes but i had word play with them....


if you want a audio record a freestyle post up in the studio forum. all audios go there
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Top Bottom