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JUDGMENT
My Honest Opinion:
The beat was crackin but I think you guy's can come up wit a tighter hook! AK had the tightest verse and both AK and the first artist came hard! The second Artist could have came harder..If homeboy juices his verse up and you come wit a tighter chorus I think this song would be the shit!!
*That's my opinion, take it or eat it!!!!*
No Hate................................................Just Keepin it So So Real!
My Honest Opinion:
The beat was crackin but I think you guy's can come up wit a tighter hook! AK had the tightest verse and both AK and the first artist came hard! The second Artist could have came harder..If homeboy juices his verse up and you come wit a tighter chorus I think this song would be the shit!!
*That's my opinion, take it or eat it!!!!*
No Hate................................................Just Keepin it So So Real!
Here I'll break it down
Instrumental#3, needs to be mixed better, but a very hard beat, itz knockin'
Instrumental#4, Smooth beat, I like how you changed it up, Almost an Anthem type of track
Instrumental#5, Smooth, Hard, Kick back type of beat
East Oakland-Definitely Needs a new hook, everything else was tight. The hook didn't have enough Attitude and style to it, the delivery could've been harder.
Would you be mad- I just got to say that this track is savage.
good lyrical content,had me crackin' up
keep it up. What kind of gear are you usin'(modules, keyboards, etc.)?
Instrumental#3, needs to be mixed better, but a very hard beat, itz knockin'
Instrumental#4, Smooth beat, I like how you changed it up, Almost an Anthem type of track
Instrumental#5, Smooth, Hard, Kick back type of beat
East Oakland-Definitely Needs a new hook, everything else was tight. The hook didn't have enough Attitude and style to it, the delivery could've been harder.
Would you be mad- I just got to say that this track is savage.
good lyrical content,had me crackin' up
keep it up. What kind of gear are you usin'(modules, keyboards, etc.)?
SEE I told U.....Just change up that chorus & have homeboy come tighter on the second verse! Then that song would be tight! I have had a little experience producing some shit like songs 4 radio broadcasting & some local artist's shit..Iam an artist also & I have a very good ear 4 shit if U want ideas hit me up on the Private Message!
