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JaE RiZZo..

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#1
Aug 11, 2003
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scream@da kid.......i usually dont battle online,but im tryna start writing again....



rulez:verses due ........wheneva u want,not 2nite tho,cuz im finna leave soon.....

10 bar max!
1 bar:
........................//
........................//<<<1bar 4 u retardz....who dont kno......

no biting of course
explain da votes:
multiz-jae riz
punchez-jae riz
wordplay-jae riz
vocab-jae riz.....

^^like that........

add ne otha rulez u want..........
 
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Gothomrida

Sicc OG
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Aug 2, 2002
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~Beatin me is somethin you never could do
~Just a letter or two will show I'm better then you
~It's funny battlin someone not tight or bluffin
~Ya lyrics suck more than tubes in liposuction
~If I read ya lyrics I won't say that cat went off
~Only time you "come hard" is when you jackin off
~You couldn't come clean if Jeru gave you a colonic
~I'm like a drug addict doin to you with they do with chronic
~You ain't mashin spots or blastin glocks
~You was the nerdy high school laughin stock
~You don't know drama I'll kill you with bombs
~How you challengin emcees and you still live with moms
~You a studio cat you ain't never done shit
~My punch hits so hard it'll give ya son fits
~You couldn't get claps if you had std's
~Test me please I rip ya heart out ya chest with ease
~Is it Jae to the rizzo or H to the izzo
~Homie what you all on Jay Dick fo
~Step ya game up you ain't gotta sick flow
~This hoe is dismal what you tryna spit fo?
 
J

JaE RiZZo..

Member
#12
Aug 11, 2003
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BLah...quick shit jus 2 show diz kid waz good........

diz kid got himself *gassed up* like he been *-fucked wit helium-*...
iz like da site went *num*...........cuz *no ones -fuckin feelin em-*....
iz like fagz got *trampalenes* in dey bed da way u stay *-hoppin on dick-*....
i must got a *STD* cuz u get *burned* when im *-droppin my shit-*....(1)
diz boyz shit iz average at best.....but da kid -spittin iz great-...
battlin me u catch a *big L* like u tried *-diggin in crates-*.....(2)
fuk a bitch ass unknown,x,and gothomidra,-u catz r weak-.......
iz like yaw *missin ya arms* u pussy's,so i kno u aint neva *-clapped da heat-*....
yaw faggots tryna *talk shit*...ill grab ya *vokal cordz* n *-take em out ya ass-*......
i must work fo da *sanitation department*,cuz lyrikally im *-takin out da trash-*.....
4 ya rapz catz iz *layin*out *bad review's*like u *-fucked wit gigli-*......(3)
iz like *Cripz remakin tupac songz*cuz u cant *-fuckin C me*.....(4)

diz waz a quick ass keystyle...........

explanationz:
(1)-he said some shit bout i got a std or sumfin,n some stdz make it burn when u shit or piss.....
(2)big L(one of da best emcee's of all time) waz ina group called diggin in the crates,wit fat joe n some otha people,L=LOSS...big l..
(3)-dat movie gigli wit j lo got bad ass reviews.....shits weak...
(4)-pac hadda song "u cant see me",crips=C....u cant C me..

hopefully yaw can figure out da rest...............

NOW VOTE UP..................n compliment my verse..:)
 
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x-kalibur

Sicc OG
#14
Aug 28, 2002
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YOUR METAPHOR'S ARE WEAK AND SOME DON'T EVEN MAKE SENCE...RHYME SCHEME IS OFF AND THE WHOLE THING IS SIMPLE...YOUR AS TIGHT AS A FAGGOTS ASSHOLE...HOWS THAT FOR COMPLIMENTING YOUR VERSE?
 
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JaE RiZZo..

Member
#16
Aug 11, 2003
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*see'z haters.......

how dont my meta's make sense?......maybe cuz their punchlines.....lmao@u bein a fuckin idiot..............
simple?no one on diz site dat i seen beside grew sum even gots multiz or ne thing like me....cuz he from j4b....

holla@me when u have talent....den i take ur opinion to heart,since den u mite kno wtf ur talkin about.......
 
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