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Jan 21, 2003
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im droppin tha bomb / like ma name is luni coleone / got your bitches hair twisted like she's goin to tha prom / squeezin tha mic under ma palm / walk around hard cause im ready to harm / call me a freak just like dj quick / ma dick erected it aint calm / call me casanova / cause i make bitches explode orgasm's like super nova / neva fuck a bitch who looks fat like tha pig from pink floyd / no need to steal cash cause im fully employed / fully loaded / aint got no love for a bitch made rodent / when it comes to this rap game im devoted / call me exclusive / cause i spit rhymes that leave you illusive / sometimes i can be abusive / you wont see me jumpin out of limosinez / like Mr mentiroso i wanna go from dreams to better things / spendin c-note's / tastin vino's / sellin out cd's in all million's / to ma real civilians / spreadin wide like grams / most of this rappers are all scams / wanna battle me ill eat you on tha mic like some fuckin clam's / call me uncle sam cause im jackin your money / a nigga like you who cant spit right / just wont eat / dont be mad mothafucka cause you aint got no bread or meat.
 
Aug 11, 2003
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iono if diz iz wat thiz site thinkz iz tight.......but persoanlly i think diz waz weak......not tryna talk shit

u had:
little to no multiz
no punchez
weak wordplay
weak metas...

elevate.....dun take diz as hating,take it as constructive criticism......