ANY ADVICE ON THIS????

[prodigy91]

IM WORKING ON A NEW BANNER FOR MY MYSPACE....SINCE I GOT BETTER AT PHOTOSHOP IM MAKING ANOTER THIS IS MY WORK SO FAR NOT FINISHED...IM STILL ADDING MORE SHAPES AND GRADIENTS ON LATER....ANY ADVICE WITH THE PIC...I TOOK IT WIT A NIKON 4. SUMTIN MEGA PIXELS SMALL CAMERA NOT THE GREATEST BUT YEA HERES BEFORE AND AFTER FOR THE PICTURE AND MY NEW BANNER......


BEFORE

AFTER

AND MA UNFINISHEd BANNER(STIL WORKIN ON IT 50/50 DONE)

any feedback will be appreciated

 

[CHAPO GUZMAN]

imo you took away one of the best aspects of the picture.. the tags on the wall

 

[Likwid]

That's like a 45 second hack job.

 

[FANATIKAL]

^ lol
c/s

I think you should start over

 

[prodigy91]

That's like a 45 second hack job.

^ lol
c/s

I think you should start over

LIKE I SAID IM NOT DONE WITH IT....AND ITS 50/50 DONE....FOR ONE IVE BEEN ONLY DESIGNING IN PHOTOSHOP AND RARELY ILLUSTRATOR FOR ONLY HALF A YEAR NOW.......SO YEA IM NOT GOOD AS EVERYONE HERE YET.....2 I THINK IM DOING PRETTY GOOD FOR A STARTER AND I WILL POST IT WHEN IM FINISHED.......SO IM ASKING FOR FEEDBACK AND WHAT ITS MISSING...WAT SHOULD I TAKE OUT THAT KIND OF SHIT.....NOT IF ITS A HACK JOB OR SUM SHIT

 

[numba2stunna]

Take away the blur and leave the picture in color..... ghost the tags in with the photoshop graphics.

 

[*Thug-C*]

I THANK ITS DOPE BUT YEAH I WOULD GHOST THE TAGS TOO IN THE BACKGROUND WERE THAT DEAD/RED SHIT IS