YOUNg CUTTHROAT,
DEFINITELY WORK ON YOUR SHADOWS.
THE FIRST ONE:
LOOKS INCOMPLETE. THE EAR LOOKS LIKE IT NEEDS MORE DETAIL. LOOK AT AN EAR AND DO THE CONTOURS IF YOUR SUBJECT DOESN'T HAVE ENOUgH CLARITY(CAUSE OF THE HAIR). DEFINITELY ADD SOME MORE SHADOWS TO ACCENT THE LIPS. THE EYEBALL NEED THAT BLAK OUTLINE(OR MANIPULATION OF THAT ILLUSION, AND REMEMBER TO ACCENT WITH DARK SHADOWS. SOME SHADOWS WOULD HAVE COMPLIMENTARY COLORS AND OTHAS TONES OF gREY TIL IT'S BLAK.
THE XND ONE:
THE LIPS DEFINITELY NEED THE ACCENTS AND SHADOWS. AND THE SHADOWS UNDA THE NEK NEED TO BE WAY DARKER. THE EYES HAVE THE SAME PROBLEM AS THE FIRST AND THE NOSE NEEDS THE BLAK(OR N-E DARK SHADOW VARIANT) WHERE THE NOSTRILS SHOULD BE. DON'T BE SCARED TO USE DARKER SHADOWS ON HER FACE. CASE IN POINT, THE LEFT SIDE WHERE HER CHEEK BONES IS AT. gRADIENTS ARE PERFECT FOR THESE TYPES OF SHADOWS.