about my paper (DONT BITE MY SHIET) *leave some feedback*

[slapboyzproductions]

You could tell by tha shine on my stones, the new model fly phone, the soft down that i chose to lie on

that ya boy cheese, yes, been gettin chedda not swiss
if you tryna take me out, man, ya betta not miss

I got 3 or 4 wifeys thats clean enough to kiss and I only call my hoes if my niggas need a bitch.

I floss bait on my hooks and they after my line
at the mall hoes harass me more than niggaz do a dime.

*I got wayyyy more but i dont wanna get rabies.

 

[TROLL]

my honest opinion its not the worst but no where near the best. u got some good punches, but its hard for me to imagine what it actually sounds like cuz the way its written down. 1 outta 10 i give it a 4

 

[Soulcollector]

Nigga, uz could of came harder. But overall u did ok. Like leatherFace said no where near the best. But good effort!

 

[Cante-up]

Nigga, uz could of came harder. But overall u did ok. Like leatherFace said no where near the best. But good effort!

^^^^dont try to school he 's better than u.....

 

[slapboyzproductions]

thankx folx, and @ leatherface, it sounds clean when i read it!!! i gotta spit that shit over a beat and ooo weee

 

[Soulcollector]

^^^^dont try to school he 's better than u.....

Like I said cuttie black, ur wish has been granted. Post ur flow, and calm down wit ur stupid commentary!

 

[BIG CHORIZO]

LOL @ Soulcollector trying to school ANYONE down when it comes to flows. He is the absolute WORST at flowing.

 

[Anghellic831]

^^^^