Can I get some feedback here? I've written a bunch of shit just in classes with no sounds but never written anything to a beat. I don't write about the streets and all that cuz that ain't my thing just some lyrical shit about life in general. It's hard for me to judge my own shit cuz obviously if I wrote it im gonna like it but I wanna here what some other people think:
Gonna be the cream of the crop/ Takin my team to the top/ More than a dream comin with a full head of steam and won't stop/ Fuck a cop just kick rocks instead of fuckin with me/ Ain't tryin ta be above the law just livin lucky to see/ Everything presented to me, from the proper perspective/ My objective is to live and learn, then earn with what's effective/ Gotta be overprotective of dollars and make them all count/ Only the defefective ballers lose track then lack in amounts/ Left with change when they cash out cuz they spun the wheel of fortune/ Landed on that black piece of pie, shoulda stopped while they were scorchin/ Now they're left with just a portion of the previous prize/ Coulda had a whole field of potatos instead left with 1 order of fries/ Led on by the lies, from the guys they once called their friends/ Had to take the hard route to realize those fronts just pretend/ But at least they learned in the end, that more than trees create shade/ Now next time, they'll check their hand and plan before they get played
And here's 1 more shorter one:
Pour up a cup of courage juice to losen up that soul/ You're so uptight u might just find some fight stuck in your own asshole/ Can't control my urge to service you with what runs through these veins/ Play the game the right way stop tryin to live your life the same/ Hop off the train the tracks just mislead you to false hopes and conclusions/ What you see is what you get if your eyes can't see through illusions/ Which produce confusion to keep you comin back for countless clues/ None of which is truly true just shit that twists your mind like screws/ Sick as the flue or the fever leave it to Beaver to be a square/ Not fair like flippin a coin cuz you're never going to compare
Gonna be the cream of the crop/ Takin my team to the top/ More than a dream comin with a full head of steam and won't stop/ Fuck a cop just kick rocks instead of fuckin with me/ Ain't tryin ta be above the law just livin lucky to see/ Everything presented to me, from the proper perspective/ My objective is to live and learn, then earn with what's effective/ Gotta be overprotective of dollars and make them all count/ Only the defefective ballers lose track then lack in amounts/ Left with change when they cash out cuz they spun the wheel of fortune/ Landed on that black piece of pie, shoulda stopped while they were scorchin/ Now they're left with just a portion of the previous prize/ Coulda had a whole field of potatos instead left with 1 order of fries/ Led on by the lies, from the guys they once called their friends/ Had to take the hard route to realize those fronts just pretend/ But at least they learned in the end, that more than trees create shade/ Now next time, they'll check their hand and plan before they get played
And here's 1 more shorter one:
Pour up a cup of courage juice to losen up that soul/ You're so uptight u might just find some fight stuck in your own asshole/ Can't control my urge to service you with what runs through these veins/ Play the game the right way stop tryin to live your life the same/ Hop off the train the tracks just mislead you to false hopes and conclusions/ What you see is what you get if your eyes can't see through illusions/ Which produce confusion to keep you comin back for countless clues/ None of which is truly true just shit that twists your mind like screws/ Sick as the flue or the fever leave it to Beaver to be a square/ Not fair like flippin a coin cuz you're never going to compare