A verse of my album

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Stealth

Join date: May '98
May 8, 2002
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i'm goin to bed soon, i've been busy as fuck lately, but i felt like droppin this. My album is extremely local, i have no hopes of makin it big in my town, so its geared mostly towards those i know. This song is about graduating and moving on.

From Junior High to Senior High/
From Newlongsburg to bein high/
From riding bikes to DUI's/
Its hard to say "I"ll see you guys"/
From NES to PS2/
From what was taught to what is true/
From trends and friends to cults and crews/
I'd die for you, turn black and blue/
From squares to Cope/ So scared to toke/
Knock knock jokes to bathroom humor/
To parties with bacardi, 40 oz. at Smartie Arties - STOP THE RUMORS/
Cuz its gettin too real/
Its hard to leave my friends cuz its the end of Murrysville/
Its endin but it ain't over: too much for us to forget/
We movin on and movin along/ Got love from life to death/
I feel my chest beat harder cuz my heart is ripped and torn/
Its hard to say goodbye to those we've known since we was born/
So i warn all that follow: the end comes quicker than you'd think/
So grab a bag of schwag, pour out some liquor and take a drink//And live it up/
With no regrets/
Rainchecks/ And start a fight/
---Don't clown around, clown other towns/
Lay it down and you'll unite/

Once the last person spits his verse, i'll send you up the audio....gimme some feedback.
(Sorry i ain't been around lately. They got me workin the night shift...)

P.S. I know its not extremely lyrical, but i think with meaningful songs, spittin a tight verse detracts from the message.
 
Jul 25, 2002
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word i read it more like a poem than a flow to me too.its dope, but my question is how would tight lyrics take meaningfulness away from the song?do the damn thang playa.stay up. 4-SHO
 

Stealth

Join date: May '98
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The Crossroads, for example, is a meaningful song. Its talkin about all the dead homies and how they mourn their death and can't wait to see them in heaven. I've seen the lyrics, and i know what they say. But for such a meaningful song, how many million Americans actually know all the words?