a sicc ass flow im workin on so i need feedbacc please!!

[Young Psyc]

this shit needs work but its tyte


MAN IM LIKE THAT ZOIDAC/
CLIK-CLAK COCK THAT HAMMER BACK/
BITCH IM BOUT TA PILL YOUR CAP/
IN A SKI MASK AND IN ALL BLACK/
ITS A KNOW FACT THAT I LIKE TO JACK/
SO STAY STRAPPED CAUSE IM ON THE ATTACK/
A PSYCHOPATH/
DO THE MATH/
MAN ILL SPLIT YOUR DOME IN HALF/
SUDISTICC LAUGHES/
BLOOD BATHS/
TURN THE OTHER CHEEK MAN FUCK THAT/
I SEE RIGHT TROUGH YOU,YOU LIKE GLASS/
LIGHT UP THE SKY WHEN I BLAST/
FUCK PULLIN OVER IMA HIT THE GAS/
LIGHT UP THE BLUNT THEN I SMASH/
FUCK A CRASH/
IM A MUTHA FUCKIN SAV/
NINE MILLAMETER IN THE MUTHA FUCKIN DASH/
PLUS A WHOLE LOT OF WEAD AND A GANG OF HASH/
TAKE THE POLICE ON A WILD RIDE & LEAVE EM WHIPLASH/

I KNOW I KINDA TRAIL OFF AND START TALKIN BOUT SOMETHING ELSE.BUT IT IS TYTE
LET ME HEAR YALLS OPINON THAT BE COO THXS.

 

[-TiM C-]

its normal. seems like you have the same exact vocab and flow as everyone in this board.. try to get a different style, and if not, get more lyrical with the played-out 'killing' theme. just my .02$

 

[Young Psyc]

but what I say I really mean
and thats all I know its sad but true
i feel you thou a lot of people on here talk about the same shit
but what i say is REAL!


thxs 4 feedbacc homie

 

[-TiM C-]

^ not to mention, a lot of rap.. more then half i think, is delivery. if you sound tight, i dont care if your talking about playin chess, it'll be tight.

hard to judge on just lyrics.

 

[Young Psyc]

yea it would sound hella tyte if you heard me say it, the delivery is kinda slow and smooth.its tyte my homies like it.but it do need work

 

[DeadBodyBaker]

Sound aight to me homie. You just need to expand your vocabulary a little bit. Your style will come into its own with time and hard work. Just try to keep it real to yourself and keep ya head up. Don't ever listen to the people dissin cuz it really only matters what you think about it. So keep it real and peace out...

 

[lilheat916]

ITs coo

Yo i give it to u its phat but u flow to much like when u said zodiac u rhymed wit it like 5 times then switched into rhyming wit some else.But everything else is coo.

Peace LIL HEAT

 

[D-Locc60]

CLIK-CLAK COCK THAT HAMMER BACK/
BITCH IM BOUT TA PILL YOUR CAP/
IN A SKI MASK AND IN ALL BLACK/

THATS THE SAME LINES ON EVERY LYNCH, DOC, RAIDED AND SICX ALBUM THAT I OWN.......

AND HOW IS IT, THATS ALL THAT YOU KNOW....
YOU BUMPIN SICC ALBUMS DOESNT MEAN THATS ALL YOU "KNOW".

IT MEANS THATS ALL YOU LISTEN TOO AND THATS ALL YOU CAN RAPP ABOUT IT.

livin it and listen to it
2 different thangs


D-Locc

 

[Young Psyc]

when i say thats all i know i mean thats all thats on my mind and thats what comes out when i wright and iv allways been that way since a little kid. and i dont only listen to just gangsta shoot em up rap(but thats what i relate to most and what i was raised around) if its good music i listen.(know offence but you dont what the fuck i be bumbin) and i cant remember any lines from lynch or x that sound like that maybe you can post some that are simmular(how ever you spell it)i aint trippin its nothing.



besides that what other opinions do u have on the verse?

dlocc u still be on gangwars?

 

[Young Psyc]

thxs for feedbacc everyone thats coo.

 

[MrDontGIVEaFUCK]

you can do better....

 

[D-Locc60]

besides that what other opinions do u have on the verse?

dlocc u still be on gangwars?

i think you should Expand yo mind playa.
do yo thang.........
and

yea....i still be on gwars.....but i didnt play the past 2 rounds cause no one wants a Rilla on they team.

D-locc

 

[Young Psyc]

WHAT HAPPEND TO THE ROLLINHOMIES?

 

[Young Psyc]

i think you should Expand yo mind playa.

IM WORKIN ON THAT LOL

 

[Young Psyc]

JUST FEEL LIKE FLOWIN

MAN IM HIGH AS FUCK RIGHT KNOW AND I FEEL LIKE FLOWIN
LETS SEE IF I CAN EXSPAND.

THIS IS OF THE TOP OF MY DOME

iT GOES MURDA MURDA ALLWAYS ON MY MIND/
ITS CRITICAL TO KEEP MY POCKETS FILL WIT NICKELS & DIMES/
PAPER CHASEN BABY ALL ACROSS THE FUCKIN NATION/
THESE AIRHEAD MUTHA FUCKAS WALKIN AROUND TALKIN FAKE SHIT/
A GLOCK 45 MAN THEY JUST DONT KNOW/
PUT A NICE ROUND HOLE IN YOUR MUTHA FUCKA SKULL/
GLOCKS IN THE CUTS MUTHA FUCKA WE THE LOCCEST/
WIT ALL THIS BULLSHIT ITS KINDA HARD TO STAY FOCUSED/
GOTTA KEEP MY MIND STRIGHT MAN MUTHA FUCK THESE BUSTAS/
THEY WANNA KEEP ME DOWN BUT ILL ALLWAYS RISE ABOVE THEM/
THEM PUNK MUTHA FUCKAS WALKIN AROUND TALKIN SHIT/ THEY KEEP ON TALKIN MAN THEY GONNA BE WALKIN AROUND WIT A FAT LIP/AND GASHES/CUZ WHEN THE SITUATION GETS DRASTIC/ IT CALLS 4 DRASTIC ACTIONS/
IT CALLS 4 FULL METAL JACKETS/
IT CALLS 4 DEATHS AND CASKETS/
LALALALLA I THINK THATS IT LOL

KNOW THAT I READ IT IT SOUNDS ALL RIGHT BUT MY CUZZIN HEARD ME FLOW IT RIGHT NOW HE SAID IT WAS TYTE ITHINK THIS FLOW IS COO
DLOCC MAN I HAVENT BEEN ON GANGWARS 4 A MINUTE NEATHER IM THECOGNAC KILLA BEEN MEANING TO JOIN THIS ROUND WAS UP WIT A GANG?

 

[D-Locc60]

WHAT HAPPEND TO THE ROLLINHOMIES?

shit.....after like 6 rounds, everyone wanted to be the BOSS and they went off on their own.

we did good......ROLLINHOMIES was in the TOP 6 for 4 rounds.


i might get it started bacc up next round if i have time...
D-Locc<<<< new baby girl=limited time on the net.



D-Locc

 

[-TiM C-]

whats gangwars?

 

[D-Locc60]

http://www.gang-wars.com/

 

[Big Paqo]

D-Locc<<<< new baby girl

congagulatoins this is young psyc

 

[D-Locc60]

Thanks Young psyc!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


d-locc