ok tweeze..here my opinion.
i dont know if its these headphones or the song, but it sounds like dude recorded the shit using two tins cans and some string and usingthe trunk of a cadillac as a mic booth.
Dudes flow was ok, hes not exactly weak but he's not quite tight, he's got some potentioal so if dude keeps at it he will find his voice and ride the beat a lil smoother...the video was kinda weak and basic ut it doesnt seem like it was mean to be much. except for a lil visual to go along with the flow.
dude could be really tight but theres no way of telling from this video...tell him to keep at it though