A little something

[L.K.D]

L.K.D be the lyrical host/ dont stand to close/ like snoop i paid tha cost / 2 be the boss / haters say adios/ i aint dr.dre 2 diagnose / what you smokin on / cause i be lay back on tha caddy tokin /
cant see me thru tha night like a black navigator / fooz be bustin flowz with small brainz like them alligatorz / waitin fo tha hustle that i got / take me straight 2 tha top / told ya befo im just like a six fo when it dropz / everywhere i go i get ma propz / lookin out fo tha copz / im sellin ma cropz / livin this dangerouz dayz on them blockz / haterz be comin in flockz / ma flowz i keep them like ma job in stockz / im handlin thiz dope fiendz / cause tha world is a circle like them ringz / gotta be livin like kingz / controllin everything / by itz stringz / ma flowz cut deeper / i neva forget bout ma tweakerz / out on the streetz lookin fo somethin 2 eat / im so unique / and is on in tha ghetto / bustin flowz dreamin bout the dinero

 

[Chaos]

OK first....get a whole new style... the short lines make it kind of dull, more wordplay PLEASE.... keep it up though

 

[L.K.D]

hahahaha damn is ma first time postin calm down

 

[Bone]

^
Welcome to the board. You only get better from this point. Some critics are remorseless but they keep it real wit you

 

[x-kalibur]

^Bone his the nail on the head:devious:

pz

 

[Chaos]

dont trip bro i was tryin to help, you only get better form now on hit me up on aim and we'll have some half ass battles for some practice... pz

 

[L.K.D]

Yeah thankz dawg i notice it just came from the mind ma linez are 2 short cause i tried 2 flow that right now n it didnt sound good i got yahoo messanger if u wanna bust flowz thankz

 

[dissciple211]

yo

not bad for ur first post dog, most cats first post is wack as hell. Fa real the more u spit, the better you gonna get especially when u start off, the more u write or free you gonna keep progressing so just get involved in as much shit as possible.1

 

[L.K.D]

meet tha rhymez / tha homie chaoz said i do'em in short linez / so ma style gotta be modified / i aint trippin / i gotta make this art / he'z a homie but otha mothafuckaz tryinna rip this shit apart / i hit tha bull eyez when im throwin up dartz / spit a rap / faster than a nigga bustin a caps / copz tracin / cause they know bout thiz gangsta flowz embracin / wanna lock me up in tha county so 25 with an L im facin / time is tickin so im racin / therez no time in this game fo slow pacin / gotta spread ma horizon / leavin footprintz / as haterz keep on arrivin / niggaz wanna talk shit bout otha niggaz when they aint bustin flowz cause there mind is constipated / flowz like thiz keep northern cali activated / wanna climb up tha ladder / when the funk goes on all them fooz scatta / like tha homie chaoz said you bitchez fled from tha scene / left me there with the matchez n gasoline / now im huntin your dreamz / inside in the back of your head makin you scream .

 

[Chaos]

now thats better ... haha i like that you used my line ... ill hit you up on yahoo