a flow i made. give me some input please.

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May 21, 2002
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yo dogg im the zone/ u stupid leavin ur vest shown/ now im forgettin leavin ya chest filled with chrome/ instead im gonna leave ya dome blown/ to shreds/ jus another souvenir for my collectionof heads/ fuck the law im reckin the feds/ with a barage of heat/ ambushin them to leave em in a garage on my street/ gettin the applause for my feat/ not lettin the rest know that shit was orchestrated/ tried to take out the only witness but his porch was gated/ so i left and came back with a plastic explosive/ fittin to leave his land drastic and eroded/ now the criminal is unknown/ there's no chance i'll be caught or gunblown/ im in that one zone/ of a feelin like when i come home/ i feel like i got security/ from all the fools that wana murda me/ thats why i sleep with a strap/ between the shorts and the crease in my back/ im in peece with my strap/ front door kicked in by the police so i tried to bounce out the back/ i've reached the back yard/ feelin the scrapes from my gat guard/ i still mash fast under the black stars/ now i stop cuz i've reached my safe spot/ jus escaped the pain of bein way caught/ it was play taught/ to me like it would never happen/ until that shit became real and played the game ill and got my trainer clappin/ much love to the power up above.