A cover I'm working on... FEEDBACK!!!

[Fridge]

Hey guys, I'm workin' on a cover for this Mixtape we're putting out up here. I need some constructive criticism. Nothing is finished yet, any feedback will be put to good use. Even if you can think of a better name for the theme, it's all wanted.

Here it is...

 

[TriFlen Locc]

I like it-its just that the gloves need a little work to em. you should probably go to image adjust and tweak with the Brightness/Contrast

 

[Fridge]

Aight...

Cool, thanks a bunch.

 

[V]

you should take out the fadded "punch out" text from tha baccground,
n it might look better witout the glovez, or try gettin some new onezz


outro
SiKHMaDe

 

[40ozthug99]

damm that looks fuckin tight to me....

 

[Fridge]

Yeah...

I'm prolly gonna tweak those gloves or change them.

What about the microphone that drops from the top, is that corny?

 

[TONY206]

you should take out the fadded "punch out" text from tha baccground,
n it might look better witout the glovez, or try gettin some new onezz


outro
SiKHMaDe

^^^^^
also i think the mics straight, its a good idea since the anouncers have em and it has to do with music. its looking good fridge!

btw is that the undercaste logo in the ring?

 

[Fridge]

Yeah...

...btw is that the undercaste logo in the ring?

Yeah, that is. It'll look clearer at the final resolution, that was a very low res pic. The mixtape should be pretty damn hot, there's some exclusive verses from 151, Twin G, Half-Sane, Aquino, Bad Luk, Willie Will, Native Son, Rees, Pain, even me. I think there's going to be an exclusive Kurupt freestyle too. Plus there's many other cats I'm forgeting to name and some heard to find verses from more famous rappers mixed in with those from teh 206. It's all to Industry Beats, it's gonna be pretty fuckin' hot.

 

[Juan Million]

This could turn out really tight if you work on the text a little more. Mostly the bottom text.

 

[Fridge]

what do you think that the text needs the most? I'm totally down for some feedback, as far as how to twirk it. What do you think about the name of the CD?

 

[D-Skrilla]

It's tight. The bottom text needs some more work, and tweak the gloves cuz they look orange and the rest of the cover is red.

 

[Fridge]

What should I do to the bottom text? I already tweaked the gloves, but I can't think of what to do to the bottom text, it doesn't look right to match it to the top. Any ideas?

 

[Fridge]

Herre's what I tweaked...

This is what I've updated...

 

[CcytzO Loc]

lookin good...take out the baccground faded punchout though....do you draw the illustrations yourself????

 

[Fridge]

lookin good...take out the baccground faded punchout though....do you draw the illustrations yourself????

You think that faded punchout is whack? I want something to fill behind it, it looks empty to me. I didn't draw the illustrations, those are from photos that I shopped.