8FIVE8 vs. MRDONTGIVEAFUCK

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Apr 25, 2002
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no rules, just dissing this bitch now close your eyes
im rude, but dude its that time, all hoes must die
tryin to bring the siccness back, my skills will just past you
they say theres two sides, im straight your gay... now thats true
been gone for a while, still got skill... battles im dishin em up
See my name? whatever you say, im still not given a fuck
im a vet here folks, i dont care if this chump hates me
he is going nowhere in life, he'll probably marry the lunch lady
u got guts, what makes u think your capable of steppin to me
my spits are hot, your gonna get burned like a second degree
rep my crew hard its krooked konceptz, learn what im talkin about
dont even diss us homie, you'll die and cops be chalkin you out
im the self proclaimed champ here, all who step get defeated
and when your reading this i wont be surpirsed if you retreated
i know your scared, i'll go agianst the odds, ive challenged hundreds
its my time to rip this kid raw, now lets all hope the glove fits
damn it feels good to pour out hate and let the tongue tiwst
lose to this homo? aint a chance, the siccness is gonna love this


KrookEd KoncePtz, we'll be back
 
Apr 20, 2005
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8FIVE8 stay humble, i'll make this fake future prospect tumble
I got u losing sleep everynight plus u bought yourself a shovel
for u to dig your own grave with,
fuck u and them glowsticks u go to raves with
verbally stabbin u with the tail Steve Irwin got stang with
Then i'm chasin down all your boyfriends u gang bang with
I read your last couple of lines, its all startin to make sense
You used tongue twist and homo in the same sentence
Who looks like the fag now?, besides u and your pops
I bet u and your Krooked friends use mics as cocks
but enough of them bullshit raps u can relate to
u say your shits hot and u pump shit up, then i'mma deflate u
travel back to the past to fuck your momma and re-create u
or i'll just fuck your moms right now to replace you
u say u spittin fire that'll give me 2nd degree burns?, please
I spit them flames that'll evaporate Mr. Freeze with ease.


Customer Service Gunner,
8FIVE8
 
Apr 20, 2005
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thanks alot fellerz. Good battle MrDontGiveaFuck. I'm open to challenge anybody. This will definately help us all out with writing skills and what not.
 
Feb 12, 2003
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#10
Not hatin on 8five8 but i didnt feel that flow man.. It didn't really go together too much and the punchlines seemed un-original too me; but then again thats just my 2 cents man.. Please dont take it as some hate; its nothing but that.. I aint hatin cuz i know you got spitters, it's obvious you got talent n all that; but this flow seemed a bit rushed too me.. I dont know.. Anyways heres some hot lines i DID like from ya' flow -

u say your shits hot and u pump shit up, then i'mma deflate u
travel back to the past to fuck your momma and re-create u
or i'll just fuck your moms right now to replace you
u say u spittin fire that'll give me 2nd degree burns?, please
I spit them flames that'll evaporate Mr. Freeze with ease.


But yea everything else i didnt really like dude.. But them bars above were straight fire..



And as for Biggz, i thought you had a steady flow all the way through.. And when I was spittin both of y'alls stuff to myself Biggz's flow was the only one that actually went together real good.. And his punchlines were more original; all together his verse seemed a bit "neater" and original.. Atleast thats my opinion, anyways here's a few bars i really liked off Mr.DontGiveAFuck's verse -

tryin to bring the siccness back, my skills will just past you
they say theres two sides, im straight your gay... now thats true


See my name? whatever you say, im still not given a fuck
im a vet here folks, i dont care if this chump hates me
he is going nowhere in life, he'll probably marry the lunch lady


my spits are hot, your gonna get burned like a second degree
rep my crew hard its krooked konceptz, learn what im talkin about
dont even diss us homie, you'll die and cops be chalkin you out


and when your reading this i wont be surpirsed if you retreated
i know your scared, i'll go agianst the odds, ive challenged hundreds
its my time to rip this kid raw, now lets all hope the glove fits


Them punchlines were original as fuck.. And the whole verse flowed together extremley well.. I dont know what y'all thinkin honestly, but, Biggz defantly got my vote..

V: Mr.DontGiveaFuck aka Biggz


Both y'all had coo' verses but i think biggz was jus more consistent and flowed a bit more.. yupyup, good shit from both y'all tho.