4 EVER WITH ME

[SMILEY LOCZTERO]

I'M WORKING ON THIS TRACK JUST NEEDS A HOOK BUT I WANNA GET SOME OPINIONS BOUT THIS SONG NEGATIVE OR POSITIVE ARE WELCOMED..ITS
NOT A LOVE SONG SO DONT LET THE TITLE FOOL YOU GUYS..ITS A STORY LINE TYPE SONG SO PEEP IT LEMME KNOW WHAT YOU TIHNK

4 ever new.mp3 - 4.32MB

 

[huelgabird408]

I know you trying to keep it on a Dark/horrorcore type of vibe. But I'd clear up your voice a bit, makes it hard to hear what you're saying. If that makes any sense lol.

Other than that, song wasn't bad. Actually liked the story.

 

[SMILEY LOCZTERO]

its not finished just a rough draft yea its hard to make out some of the words,just wanted some opinions on it..im out of state right now and thats the only song i had on a disc that i wanted to get some feed back on..i appreciate it too.. ive gotten alot of songs in order for that new cd in the works,and im actually working on 4 other projects.. theres one song i think alot of people are going to like its called "Kill That Bitch"ft Skarekrow,Lefty,Redrum,Droopy Lector,Me bout 9 min long or so ill give it a siccness exclusive haha

 

[RobertoxYLx]

Still need that hook? If the slot is open and you dont mind me hopping on it, ill do it.