1st time flow...my folks says i got heat YOU TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!!!

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Jul 10, 2002
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its all just for the love of the money
my niggas is hungry,
out here hustlin fa chedda
through any type of weather takin these drastic measures
just tryna get it together,one life to live and we got too much to lose/
do what ya gotta do to stack that paper and make that revenue
its true what the say
you can take a playa out the game,but not the game out of a playa/
it just the way the world made us
generations raised to be money makers
up in this nation of hatred surrounded by the racists and crooked politicians
based on a system, built by a country that kills it own chldren
better read whats written
the description of hell is the world we livin in
the greed for them dividends
is what motivates both ballaz and businessmen
two sides of the fence,dollars and cents make u[p the dividing line
For the love of the money, if it aint about scrilla it aint worth my time
and they say that justice is blind, have you ever wondered why?
Its cause the bitch stays high and she got dollar signs for eyes
once you realize that the facts become clear and present
life can be a stressful situation, but only if you let it
betta count ya blessins,keep ya head up qnd keep clockin them figures quick
surround ya self wit idiots and get clouded wit ignorance
....and some ole other shit...but theres a taste...tell me what ya think, should a nigga start rappin????
 
Apr 25, 2002
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It has a pretty go flow to it but first of all, I wasn't really feelin the lyrics and second, I'm not gonna judge "should a nigga start rappin????" based on one flow.

Hit us with another taste but work on ya lyrics...
 
Jul 10, 2002
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right on for the feedback ya'll....

@ Juan
Why wasnt you feelin the lyrics??? not ya style or you just dont understand where im comin from?? what kind of rap do you listen to? just curios...thnks for the fdbck

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@ timC....naw, no audio from me....if I did how do I post it dogg??? (be real specific cause im new to posting music online)


@ Mr Typcee....
can you direct ya boy to a post where you was flowin, hit me wit a link...remeber this was off the dome juss typin

to all that said i need practice. yeah i know......but im lookin to see if i should even keep this up, if you think a cat got POTENTIAL and aint just spittin some ole weak shit...let a nigga know

ima hit yall wit another one in a min

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Apr 25, 2002
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I wasn't feelin it because the lyrics were a little too simple and it just seemed like you kept repeating yourself only using different words.

Also...

"up in this nation of hatred surrounded by the racists and crooked politicians
based on a system, built by a country that kills it own chldren"

^although I was feelin that part the most, it seemed out of place. It's like what started out to be a "money" flow turned into an "our government sucks" flow and then at the end it changed into a "fuck ignorant people" flow.

feel me
 
Apr 25, 2002
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Uaintknowin said:
@ Mr Typcee....
can you direct ya boy to a post where you was flowin, hit me wit a link...remeber this was off the dome juss typin

NAH...I WUZ JUST MAKIN FUNNA SOMEBODY WHEN I TYPED THAT SHIT...BUT ANYWAY...I DONT FLOW TOO OFTEN ON HERE FOR THA FACT THAT I DONT AGREE AZ MUCH WITH THIZ TEXT MICING...I ALSO DONT LIKE FLOWIN FOR NUTHIN...ID LINK YA BUT IM TOO LAZY TO BE LOOKIN FOR THAT SHIT...YOULL SEE ME ON THA TOURNEY THO...BUT DONT TAKE MY SHIT TO OFFENSE...$IDEWAYZ
 

Stealth

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May 8, 2002
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but im lookin to see if i should even keep this up, if you think a cat got POTENTIAL and aint just spittin some ole weak shit
Who cares what we think? If you like it, keep doin that shit. You weren't bad for just startin. Learn from us, make up some new shit yourself, and get better. Don't let us be the judge of whether or not you should continue your rap career.

We're assholes.

Everybody else agree?
 
Apr 25, 2002
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Stealth said:


Who cares what we think? If you like it, keep doin that shit. You weren't bad for just startin. Learn from us, make up some new shit yourself, and get better. Don't let us be the judge of whether or not you should continue your rap career.

We're assholes.

Everybody else agree?
FOR ONCE,WE AGREE.....
 
Apr 25, 2002
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quit IMing me bro.. i dont want to hear it..


MR TYPCEE: SORRY BOUT THAT JOKE IN THE FLOWZ BOARD ENE
MR TYPCEE: I FEEL YOU ON THE ASSHOLE THANG
MR TYPCEE: WHY YOU THINK IM JOINING THE MILITARY DAWG
T1M24: fuck that shit bro..
MR TYPCEE: AW CMON YOU AINT NEVA SUCKED A DICK BEFORE?
T1M24: naw man..
ME TYPCEE: AIGHT ENE, I GOTTA CUT. MY AND MY ENES GONNA GO SKINNYDIPPING. PEACE