West Coast HitMen

[Upheaval]

heres a little something im working on. this is a rough draft i did tonight. i still gotta add "Mr. Murder presents" and im thinking of some other shit to add.
feedback requested.

 

[SPORADIC]

Yo,Upheave....I'm trying to figure out the composite you got going.....
Ok,
Background=Church
Title=West Coast Hitman
Photo Image=Gangsta dude with bandana
Also grungey texture...

Well,It seems the composite is confusing with the background all the way to the frontground....
Why the church background with someone looking so menacing.I dont know.I can see if it was a street or alley or hood...

Hhhhmmmm,Just quality feedback Upheave

 

[Big Teflon]

I'M FEELIN' WHAT SPORADIC SAID ABOUT THE BACKGROUND.

 

[x-kalibur]

that guy ALMOST looks intimidating.. he's gettin there.. lol

 

[45Yr Old Virgin]

he has that homer simpsons "why you little" look

 

[TONY206]

he has that homer simpsons "why you little" look

LOL

 

[3deanhg]

ditto

Yo,Upheave....I'm trying to figure out the composite you got going.....
Ok,
Background=Church
Title=West Coast Hitman
Photo Image=Gangsta dude with bandana
Also grungey texture...

Well,It seems the composite is confusing with the background all the way to the frontground....
Why the church background with someone looking so menacing.I dont know.I can see if it was a street or alley or hood...

Hhhhmmmm,Just quality feedback Upheave

 

[SikIndividuoh]

It doesn't really look like he's in front of the church due to the lighting & variation in colour/tint. As aforementioned, the concept doesn't really seem to mesh with the title. Nice grunge work though.

Regards

 

[TONY206]

@ upheaval did u do this? it looks like one of urs

 

[Upheaval]

nope, ive never even seen that.

like i said, im still workin on this. it wasnt really an attempt to put him in front of the church, just to put some symbolism in the pic. i was actually going for the cemetary part, but i kinda covered that up with the dude. i also liked the medeivel style of the church, and thought that would be tight for the grunge.
even tho the dude is all cripped out, i want to stay away from doing this overly gangsta.
thanks for the feedback everybody.

 

[Big Teflon]

THAT PIECE UP THERE REMINDS ME OF THE PIECE YOU DID WIT' SOME GUY BY A TRAIN OR SUBWAY.DON'T REMEMBER THE GUY'S NAME OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD.

 

[Upheaval]

heres another stab at it, kinda totally different. same grunge though.

 

[TONY206]

yea i like the second, thats tight, the only thing i really dont like is
the color of the "west coast hitmen" text

 

[KODOGG]

Second one is phat as hell.. Good Job.. But I think maybe you should still point out the WestCoast Hitman concept.

 

[Upheaval]

i dont know what the concept was on the first one.
for the 2, i wanted to put him inside the bell tower as a sniper, but i couldnt find anything good to work with, so i just put it behind him to insinuate his intentions. the crosshairs and the title should be enough to fulfill the idea of the bell tower.

thaks for the feedback

 

[KODOGG]

yeah behind da bell tower and him standin there like his is would be perfect.. Or jus a close up of him behind the bell tower.. But thats still sav.. Good work. Clean as fucc if i havnt already said dat.