Round 1: Deuce Vs. BETO916

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FATAL NYGHTMARE

FATAL NYGHTMARE

Sicc OG
#1
Apr 25, 2002
9,595
5
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#1
One verse a piece.
No biting.
Dick riding votes will not count.
5-0 = KO
Verses due Thursday, July 28th by 10:00PM West Coast time.
If you do not post by then you will forfeit.
Votes due by Sunday, July 31st by Midnight.

A no-show results in a forfeit and the no-show's opponent will advance, as long as he posts a verse before the deadline.

Good luck.
 
BETO916

BETO916

Sicc OG
#2
Apr 7, 2005
13,697
158
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www.myspace.com
#2
Time for war mutha fucka!! /
Strap on ya boots

This is the second time I snuffed you /
That’s why we call you Deuce

What’s your excuse? /

For being M.I.A /
For days

Like Ricky Williams was /
Down there in M-I-A.

I heard it today. /

All that crack slangin’ and shit talkin’ /

Got you kicked outta New Jerz /
Like Kenyon Martin

All that barkin’ /

Got you touched by /
Your own “Dominican team.” /

For puttin’ hood business /
Out there on computer screens

Yada-da-meen!! /

I’m spewin’ that fire!! /

You and your bitch /
Are “Fabolous” dick riders

Movin’ fast like she’s wired /
She’s lovin’ the cock

But, it’s that wack ass rapper /
That you choose to jock

I’ll make your breathin’ stop /
Thinkin’ you’re at the top

Another east coast mutha fucka /
That wouldn’t be shit without RickRock

Feel me on that!! /
You’re probably a rat

in a hole somewhere /
where Hoffa be at

Your plug got you /
made you disappear

Gave you cement Tims /
Threw you over a pier

I’m a stranger in your hood /
But, I found you with a quickness

It’s nothing to put in work /
Mane, I bang for the SICCNESS

Runnin’ thru your defenses /
I’m Bo Jackson with a mic, see

Run you over like Bosworth /
And make you read these Nikes

Broke bastard /
You ain’t seein’ no ends

Just like in this tourney /
You ain’t seein’ no wins

Don’t even pretend /
Playa what’s the use?

I'm that lyrical Ace /
that always trumps your Deuce

My rhymes got ya head spinnin’ /
Like a centrifuge

Breakin’ down your compounds /
Leave you fully reduced

I’m through with you dude /

Your spits will never touch mine /

I’m outta here, time to blaze /
Mutha fuckas, It’s lunchtime
 
Rob S4

Rob S4

Sicc OG
#5
Oct 14, 2004
2,782
0
0
44
#5
Iam going to do it tonight, iam at work. Its hard to post up a flow at work because I like to smoke and think. Thanks homie for the luck. The same to you homie, much respect. Peace.
 
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reppin_the_509

Sicc OG
#8
Sep 13, 2004
412
0
0
#8
^ok, check me out im tech801, i judge rap battles by the complexity and not the punch, cause i totally understand what a battle is, and i understand the point of them.
(sarcasm)
^wtf homie, who the fucc cares about the 1st grade rhymes, if the punchs are tight, that was a clean verse man, dont trip
 
Stealth

Stealth

Join date: May '98
#11
May 8, 2002
7,137
1,177
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#11
Tech801, reppin_the_509, BETO - don't argue in a battle. Any more bullshit threads after mine will be deleted. Keep it clean.


Clean spit Beto. It took me a while to figure out your rhyme scheme and be able to read along to your shit. Now that I understand how you set your bars up, I'm feelin that. Not a lot of multis, but your punches are directly aimed at Deuce. Good shit.
 
BETO916

BETO916

Sicc OG
#12
Apr 7, 2005
13,697
158
63
51
www.myspace.com
#12
Tech801, reppin_the_509, BETO don't argue in a battle
Click to expand...
don't trip Coach..I'm not...everyone is entitled to their opinions. everything is good on this end.

and about the multi's...I'm trying to work on that part of my game....thanks for all of the feedback y'all, positive and negative.

Peace
 
Stealth

Stealth

Join date: May '98
#13
May 8, 2002
7,137
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#13
Just trying to catch it before it gets out of hand. I like the "Coach" though. My dad's a football Coach. Guess it runs in the fam, lmao.
 
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