Peep this new track yall!

[D'struction]

What up yall... this is my most recent recorded track so hit up my soundclick and tell me what yall think..


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/dstructionmusic.htm

Title: Aint Shit 2 Me

Holla back yall and thanks for peepin the shit

 

[inasense206]

diggin it!.. keep it up man.. you've improved alot... keep that shit up!

pz

 

[tadou]

USC #1 !!!! PAC-10 BITCH, YEAH!!!!!!



Man, you sound like Lil Flip on this one (on the chorus, at least)......ill shit. Beat sounds almost like "Like a Pimp" too.....

Not really feelin the speed rapping though....instead of cramming the syllables in, really try and work on word choice, and make it sound smoothe....and the finished version of the track could be burn-to-a-cdr-and-bump-in-the-rideable, for real.

 

[D'struction]

@inasense : thanks for the feed dog good look..

@ tadou : thanks playa...glad you feelin it.

stay up

 

[Calm 1 NPK 503]

It was a cool track! I really haven't heard much of ya music but this was a good track. I'd bump it!

 

[Masked Man 2O6]

Damn D, you really impressed me this time, good shit. I'm feelin' it tha most. LOL. I got hella shit talkerz, y'all don't even know.

 

[Nonstop]

i dont know... beats are usually what catches me first... and i dont really feel them that much... but hey.. it obviously aint hurtin if one man dont like your music... keep doin your thang

 

[D'struction]

good shit yall thanks for the feed. i appreciate it

 

[D'struction]

56 views and 7 replies? yall need to peep this shit and tell me what you think for real. holla

 

[D-Menace]

i guess they aint feelin it....


well i'm not either.

 

[kaoz206]

Constructive Criticism.........

You need a better selection of beats, your not riding over that one like you should be. The concept of the song is unoriginal, separate yourself from the rest of the field. The delivery needs to really be worked on, put more emotion behind the mic like you mean every line your spittin. For your age you can only continue to grow, so keep on working on your craft.........

 

[D'struction]

i guess they aint feelin it....


well i'm not either.

At least u bein honest dogg. thanks for peepin it anyway.

Constructive Criticism.........

You need a better selection of beats, your not riding over that one like you should be. The concept of the song is unoriginal, separate yourself from the rest of the field. The delivery needs to really be worked on, put more emotion behind the mic like you mean every line your spittin. For your age you can only continue to grow, so keep on working on your craft.........

i noticed the same shit man. thanks for checkin it out.

 

[MilesAaron]

im feelin it man i cant wait to see what u flip for the mixtape