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BAMMER

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This crap was in the Flows Forum,and for a guy who does'nt smoke ganja,and lives in seclusion,I found this to be very very comical and weak.Every time you rhyme it's a one syllable word...lol,dice/life..shoes/noose...grill/kill.. :(
what happened to multi syllable,metaphors and all that other shit you were stressin....man o man,you truely are garbage.Thanks for coming to the street level forum,now..so you can understand,ADIOS AMIGO...

ANYWAY.HERE IT IS,AND IT'S SHORTER THAN HIS AVERAGE POST!

I got the whole board shook, Im a devious-cat
You talk shit? Its 2 in ya front...3-in-ya-back
I only care about my weed-and-my-raps..my money-and-fam
The microphone is sorta like a gun-in-my-hands
So before you think of comin-to-dance...buckle-ya-shoes
Cuz by the time im finished, you'll be up-in-a-noose
Struggle-wit-you? You're shakin like a handfull-of-dice
So if you come back, recognize you're gamblin-ya-life
Who's next? I'm next...and im also-ya-last
How you think you beatin me when you're false-and-you-wack?
If i saw you, i would call-you-a-fag...and spit-in-ya-grill
Cuz anytime i battle, its my mission-to-kill
You actin 'Big', but i aint givin-a-fuck..
Cuz when i hit you wit the mac, fuck ya size...its liftin-you-up
Ima bout to take the whole tourney, you gon witness-it-bitch
And why's that? Cuz My legacy's Beginnin-with-Biggz...
 
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Dak iller

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May 4, 2002
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lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol

ill rip that whole verse with one line lol.......................


"i heard little girls say better rhymes then you while they jump rope"

DAK Iller
 
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YoungVicious

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Apr 25, 2002
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While we're on the subject, everyone check out the flows forum under my thread and Stealth's freestlye thread....ya boy YV aka Tetra just came outta retirement and left the flows board MANGLED.
 
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SAM SAVAGE

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Jun 4, 2002
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Dak iller said:
lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol

ill rip that whole verse with one line lol.......................


"i heard little girls say better rhymes then you while they jump rope"

DAK Iller
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lets see it then!!!!!! its easy to talk shit but can you back it up!!!
post your flow!!!!!! can i read that one line!! never mind you were
just talking out the side of your mouth!! huh!!! lol!! i would love to
see some one rip tadou!! but sayin some shit like that and not backin
it up is some hoe shit!! so post your flow mister lyrical!!!!! there's another turney after this one you should join!!!
 
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Dak iller

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May 4, 2002
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lol i never said i was mister lyrical and i never said i was gonna drop a verse
all thats needed was a one liner to rip tadous wack ass verse lol and i dont see how i didnt back it up when i left my one liner above in quotes???



DAK
 
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SAM SAVAGE

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Jun 4, 2002
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lol!! i felt bad!!:( this my favorite place on siccness i didn't wanna start
a bunch a bullshit over nuthin!! so i erased it not because i was rattled
because i felt it was in bad taste!! geezzzz!! why does everyone have
a problem with the way i type today!!
 
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YoungVicious

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Apr 25, 2002
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Well, I didnt get to read the post Sam wrote but I get the drift....big headed? Hmmmm....all I was tryna do is get folks to peep. I was tellin the truth wasnt I? In fact, Sam, werent u one of the cats that complimented me? Im not big headed, in fact I think of myself as a humble person....but if I think my shits tight I will say so. And the fact is, a lot of folks liked readin my shit when I was on there regularly....so I thought they might wanna be informed of my return.
 
tadou

tadou

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Apr 25, 2002
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BAMMER said:
I found this to be very very comical and weak.Every time you rhyme it's a one syllable word...lol,dice/life..shoes/noose... grill/kill.. :( what happened to multi syllable,metaphors and all that other shit you were stressin....

(...)

I got the whole board shook, Im a devious-cat
You talk shit? Its 2 in ya front...3-in-ya-back
I only care about my weed-and-my-raps..my money-and-fam
The microphone is sorta like a gun-in-my-hands
So before you think of comin-to-dance...buckle-ya-shoes
Cuz by the time im finished, you'll be up-in-a-noose
Struggle-wit-you? You're shakin like a handfull-of-dice
So if you come back, recognize you're gamblin-ya-life
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"Devious-cat/3-in-ya-back/weed-and-my-raps" -- Multi-syllables
"- (the Dash key)" -- Your clue that it's a multi-syllable.
"Microphone...like a gun in my hands" -- Similie
"Shakin like a handfull-of-dice" -- Personification
"Gamble-ya-life" -- Metaphor

I dont know what you was thinkin....but stop thinkin it until you get some knowledge first...
 
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