I like your flow and you can write like a motherfucker. That beat was wack though. Were you going for the "cute Eminem" feel? Anyhow, I don't think the beat fits your style... You're not hittin' the ends on the beats, ya know?
I need to know when I wave my hand, that you're gonna hit every second pass. <--- feel free to steal that line
Shit's allright though. Keep it up.