never done this...so here it goes...

[Nightbreed]

my verbal assualt
will put a halt
to you and yours
got you bleeding through your pores
open doors and crush the norms
swarms of locusts
as i focus
my mental on wealth
it's detrimental to your health
melt you like butter
you just studder and shudder
you sacred to look
got you shook
cause i just took
your player's card
trying to act hard
i disregard bitches like you
i bury in the yard snitches like you
i carry in car
big ones for ya crew
who knew
i wiped my ass
and threw you in the trash
slash your throat and mash
get my cash
and some top notch's ass
blast fast and run passed
the dastardly bastard faggot cops
i pop cocked glocks on blocks and slang rocks
fuck hoes who suck cock on top
it dont stop
you a flop
who jocks mine
fine thats ok
but stay the fuck outta my way the day
you see me coming
cause i just might start dumping
and pumping you full of lead
13 to the head
left you dead
but you wanted funk
and now your fucked
sucking satan's dick in hell
no jail for me
you see
i be runnin the law
sippin tall cans and all



ok. thats just some bootsy shit. i'll try harder next time.
i've never battled either...so fuck it, any takers?
i could use the practice...lets sparr...all in fun.

 

[snakeyez]

that was ok.. nuttin' special. It started real well and then slipped a bit after the first few lines.. but hey, don't trip though, everyone's gotta start somewhere ya know?

 

[Nightbreed]

again. this is different.


i can't take this turmoil
my pain is soiled and feels like boiling oil
the snake has coiled around my soul
taking it's toll
rolling over in my grave
i gave thanks
to tame
this beast at hand
i understand
that i can't stand
alone
a broken home
a blood soaked poem
to exhibit the way i feel
might as well grab the steal
and end it for real
but i can deal
so i won't kill
anything but my love
for the dove with broken wings
singing songs about things
i'll never comprehend
the coming end
my nuclear lust
for the holocaust
all is lost
at the cost of ignorance
which hinders us
no deliverence
the sins to us
are pleasure to them
skim the surface
to find the treasure
it hurts us and can't be measured
left her with nothing
something i hate
sedate the way i relate
to other's troubles
and double my sublte insecurities
with impurities and poison
moisten my lips and kiss bliss
and piss on the slit wrists
of the fists raised in the air
stare into the unfairness
of the world
a polished pearl
for god to twirl
and hurrel through
the universe
my heart burst
on the first day of creation
during the divine masturbation
a sensation arose
then came faces and nations
that froze in death
from the breath of life
and strife
take the knife a make the cut
for the slut that moans for the whore
the core of our being
seeing is believing me deceiving you
we're through and there is nothing you can do
except accept the truth

 

[snakeyez]

I liked that one... that was pretty good. You switched up your style a bit from the first one, that was solid.

 

[G Vincent]

thats solid.. im agreein tha second one came titer.. stay up pimpin

 

[Nightbreed]

thanks y'all.....i'm gonna keep practicing.

 

[All Out HOGG]

2nd one was alot doper