Lil flyer i made for a jus fam mixtape vol.2

[MrFedEx503]

tell me what yall think what could be better?

 

[D'struction]

CHANGE THE TEXT COLOR MAN. U CANT SEE HALF OF THAT SHIT WIT THE LIGHTS IN THE BACKGROUND ON THE WATER REFLECTION

 

[Fridge]

or atleast outline it.

 

[tadou]

And move the text off of Nutz's jacket....no real reason for it to be touching if there's room.


Not too shabby for someone who's obviously not a graphic pro....keep it goin.

 

[EvilWayz]

man, i want to get my handz on this, Pt. 1 was savage!!

as far as the flyer goez, the cut-out of the Jus Fam logo is awfull, re-do that.........put a shadow or something dark around the featured text, to make it stand out against the background........remember to leave room on the edgez (the bleed-line) 1/16 of an inch should do it.......nudge the featured text to the right till its off uv Nutz Jacket........i dont really like the green of the text, maybe a darker green or yellow (not bright).......try removing some of the spacing inbetween "Jus Family" & "Militia Mixtape (you dont need that much)..........jus my 2centz

 

[Solidous_Snake]

^^^^What he said. Just make the neo light green go away!

 

[UnderRated]

Its cool but spell Cool Nutz right and add Potluck up on there...
We on it too damn!!LOL!!

 

[And`1]

where does he spell cool nutz wrong?

 

[tadou]

"CooNutz"

 

[THE D.U.G.O.U.T]

is that DJ CHILL outa SCREWSTON?

 

[UnderRated]

DJ Chill from Portland fam.

 

[THE D.U.G.O.U.T]

Right on