Draining Me

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Jul 30, 2002
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Emotions leave me drained,
Like leeches leave your brain,
A circumstantial force obliges me
Not even my writing is hiding me
Illegal and false prophecies,
Crossing my boundaries,
Barbarians tellin lies to me
Being punished for my blasphemy
God is mad at me, the devil laughs at me,
He knows my fate, he knows the paths I take
The ache, the pain, the game, the quake
Eating the apple, unignoring the snake
It's been awhile, since my mind was versatile
I've been focused on a one way road
A cart load, of consequential evidence,
Ready to explode, People stay talking,
Im too slow to decode,
But I see the body language,
Too much weight on my shoulders,
I can not allow the heavy freightage,
Energy evaporated, and clouds up in my mind
Forecast predicts, that I will always be confined
 
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All Out HOGG

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#4
Pronounced CLIN-SHAY

It means that the topics & choice of words is too typical, overdone, or unoriginal...wichever you prefer...

Not saying the flow was awful...But it didn'y bring anything new or hold my intrest at all
 
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yeah, thats what i thought u meant, but u spelt it wrong homie, cliche. as in clee shay, not clin my friend. but thanks for puttin in ur 2 cents
 
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i agree with the topic bein overdone... but i can respect a cat truly strugglin.. just not wanna be manic depressive fools..

thought besides it bein simple, it rhymed well.. ou spit that with a twist on it.. shit will be cool..

i liked it homie