Brainwashed(Wanna Change All That)

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ovarbmu

ovarbmu

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sum quick shit i just wrote up

chorus(x2):

Make a wish... and reverse it real quick
you got a gift.... and your portrayed real sick
you wanna lift... but then there's just one kick
they brainwashed man, they brainwashed dog

no respect.. you wanna change all that
only one not speakin on the range all black
or the teeth all plat the real world ain't that
no get a grill sign a deal and be MC Mack
it's all hate... you wanna change all that
but the game's mind frame is to slain all rap
we should rush the studio and let it all hang out
from the bay to the east, north and dirty dirty south
they hold you back... you wanna change all that
how the fuck can you advance with the same old crap
i ain't seen another pac since the days he was strapped
now bustas like paul wall talkin bout bustin' caps
they fuckin' brainwashed.. you wanna change all that
but the pain brings the rain on it's way fall back
let the melody release you no one to say peace to
help change the industry or they might never see you



gimme some feedback yall
 
ovarbmu

ovarbmu

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just so all yall know my rap name is umbravo i just had to reverse it cause i got banned on the strange music board under the name umbravo.

umbravo-name
ovarbmu-name reversed

*edit* thanks for the honest feed back
 
BETO916

BETO916

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youngsta, you are very talented.

your rhymes seem to be stronger when you have a topic you are working with...the battles you have put up, don't even compare to this verse.

keep it up mane.

peace
 
ovarbmu

ovarbmu

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verse 2:

the game is soft man... you wanna change all that
niggas hanging feather boas with the pimp game hat
but simp wimp cats addicted to playing the role
of a real thug standing with his veins all cold
they make you sick..you wanna change all that
pushin mixtapes till your shit ain't all that
or at least they got you thinkin' that you ain't all that
to source and XXL why your reviews by fags?
they don't know talent...you wanna change all that
straight turnin' away cats if they ain't all black
not even gonna listen man they ain't all wack
if they are black then they gotta be rough like new jack
fuck the industry...i don't wanna change all that
blue collar muthafuckas wanna change format
common does his own thing and they give him the care
but tecca nina can't make it to the goddamn stairs
 
Stealth

Stealth

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The way I was reading that shit in my head head was catchy as fuck. I like the New Jack line...I brought him some wiffle bats, a stop sign, and a frozen turkey when I went to see him lmao. I liked that shit though, good rhymes scheme, good content. Some of that could be a little more polished, but all in all i'm feeling it.
 
ovarbmu

ovarbmu

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Stealth said:
The way I was reading that shit in my head head was catchy as fuck. I like the New Jack line...I brought him some wiffle bats, a stop sign, and a frozen turkey when I went to see him lmao. I liked that shit though, good rhymes scheme, good content. Some of that could be a little more polished, but all in all i'm feeling it.
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lmao did he use the frozen turkey?

anyway thanks for all the feedback yall.

*edit* the funny thing about this shit is that i'm writing it as i go. i didn't write any of this shit on paper.

*edit #2* im goin' back to tighten up some of the lyrics from the first two verses. After about 5 min. peep em' again to see if you like them better.
 
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