another one, feedback would be nice

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May 19, 2002
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i cant remember if ive posted this one before or not, i think i might drink too much to remember some shit, but this is a quick verse ima re-record soon (too drunk the first time)


its hard to win when you're livin in sin, its got me sufferin in grief and agony/ and i'll be livin and feelin this way til the day the police tie the toe tag on me/ but ive never been a punk i kick it wit a sick click of evil tyrants/ not quite right in the brain and to cope wit the pain i smoke dope and express excessive violence/ so when i grab the strap i'll be glad to add to your pain and your misery/ my lifes torn apart so a cold heart that pumps straight hate is all that still lives in me/ so come feel my fury and get wrapped in my wrath/ cause if you're gettin near me you're gettin slapped wit a staph/ so stop wit all the lies and petty cries and analyze the situation/ look in my eyes and apologize or i'll penalize you for causin me aggravation
 
Jul 19, 2005
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its hard to win when you're livin in sin, its got me sufferin in grief and agony/
and i'll be livin and feelin this way til the day the police tie the toe tag on me/
but ive never been a punk i kick it wit a sick click of evil tyrants/
not quite right in the brain and to cope wit the pain i smoke dope and express excessive violence/
so when i grab the strap i'll be glad to add to your pain and your misery/
my lifes torn apart so a cold heart that pumps straight hate is all that still lives in me/
so come feel my fury and get wrapped in my wrath/
cause if you're gettin near me you're gettin slapped wit a staph/
so stop wit all the lies and petty cries and analyze the situation/
look in my eyes and apologize or i'll penalize you for causin me aggravation/
good shit homie... can see the structure of the flow, easy to follow cuzo... keep spit home boy... 1
 
May 19, 2002
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thank you for the feedback and the welcome. i been a member for a minute, i just havent posted in a long ass time. but the audio for this should be up soon as well. i'll keep y'all posted. Peace.