New Vid of Me Spittin.. [HOT oR NOT.. U Be the Judge]

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Apr 13, 2007
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GIVE ME ANY CRITICAL FEEDBACK..



I THINK I'VE IMPROVED IMO..

LYRICS:

CHECK ME IN A HOTEL CUZ I BE UP IN THIS PLACE/
WHAT U MEAN U AINT NEVER SEEN ME, TV, IM AWAY/
SEE ME, IM AWAKE, YOU BE SLEEPIN ON MY NAME N RACE/
EVERYDAY, I BE GRINDING, SHINING, TRYNNA MAKE IT PAY/
NO GUN ON MY WAIST BUT I BUST LIKE A MOSBURG/
AND U KNO IM FEELIN HIGHER THAN A FLYING SAUCER/
HAD THE LIGHTS OFF BUT I STILL SEE THE COPS SEARCH/
SEE, IT GOT WORSE, GOT EXPOSED LIKE A HOT NURSE/
BOUTA POP, SQUIRT, TAKE U DOWNTOWN, NOT CHURCH/
BOW DOWN WHEN U SEE ME CUZ BY NOW I GOT WORK/
GOT PURP, HOPE U DO ON A DAILY BASIS/
PRESCRIPTION AINT FOR ME CUZ I AINT ALL THAT PATIENT/
MY LINES IS AMAZING, MY RHYMES GOT ME PHASIN'/
IM FEELING REAL GOOD, WHY MY EYES LOOK ASIAN/
BLAZING, WHEN I COME OUT, TELL ME WHAT YA NAME IS/
SEE YOU LOOKIN REAL GOOD, BUT U AINT MEGAN/

HAA..


ANY POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE FEEDBACK IS WELCOMED...

HOLLA!
 
Apr 13, 2007
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MY BAD SEVENOHSAV IM WORKIN ON IT.. THX SPAZTAZ

I GOT A NEW JOINT W/ ONE OF MY R&B HOMIES AND I WORKED HARD AS FUCK ON THAT ONE TO MAKE SURE U COULD UNDERSTAND ME AND TRUTHFULLY, I THINK I DID A GOOD JOB ON THAT..

I'LL POST THAT LATER..


KEEP EM COMIN..
 
Dec 4, 2006
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one of the biggest probs dudes got when first recording is learning how to enunciate clearly; thatll solve alot of ur problems. also start freestyling and writing alot more if u dont, it will improve your flow and delivery by a ton. keep at it tho man
 
Aug 30, 2008
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lol wat da fuck...rap in front ah all your homies tha internet ain gon do shit for you. u dun rap in front ah no cameras on stage unlless u helllllllllllllllla out here

wanted to mention u look like you enjoying man that what it all about... keep enjoying yourself man that the only way to do it big
 
Sep 5, 2008
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you're the reason hip hops dead.

it's been what, over 2 years now and you still sound wack as you first did. Give it up.
 
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At first I thought dude was finna spit over the beat from the vertical scrolling levels on Contra lmao...don't quit your day job lil bro!