Azer One aka DEA 40831 - Picture Me Rollin'
- Thread starter phreakey
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got about a minute into it and wasnt quite feeling it, but everyone has a market nowadays..you just have to find yours...good luck to you man.
EDIT: i cant just tell you i wasnt feeling it without tellin you why. The beat was the cleanest part about the song, but your lyrics came off ass "easy" or pretty basic with little creativity. there was a lack of wordplay and your delivery was alright,but nothing special or memorable.
If you are gonna use a 2pac track, you gotta tear that shit apart...dont ruin a masterpiece with a subpar remake, i think this track could have been written better...but at the end of the day, that just my opinion..
EDIT: i cant just tell you i wasnt feeling it without tellin you why. The beat was the cleanest part about the song, but your lyrics came off ass "easy" or pretty basic with little creativity. there was a lack of wordplay and your delivery was alright,but nothing special or memorable.
If you are gonna use a 2pac track, you gotta tear that shit apart...dont ruin a masterpiece with a subpar remake, i think this track could have been written better...but at the end of the day, that just my opinion..
oh wow. i propped Dirt E's post without hearing the track cause I agreed about how you can't embarrass yourself on a Pac track. ...but fuck, talking about brain dead rhymes. You really need to go back to the drawing board or read a dictionary or something. Car Far, Ball Fall, Ends Freinds. are you fucking serious?