Week5: Juan v. Paqo
- Thread starter Stealth
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why is it you always have the other person bust first?-
to buy you time to respond with an insult or a curse?-
juan mill? you ain rich so why you gotta lie?-
savin up your checks you get from s-s-i?-
you a big balla now, payless shoes to have a night of fun-
then when the partys over take em back to get a refund-
you steal flowers from the cemetary to mack on hos anyway-
and your version of henny is watered down E & J-
you neva hit the chronic, but you pretend to cough-
your gonna be the next sisqo.....the way your fallin off-
cuz its a cold callous world my friend,your jus in the way-
you say your charasmatic, i think your just gay-
you ain got no breezys, more chicken heads then boston market-
you claim your actin wild but you mistaked it for being retarded-
you against me your gonna drown in a panic-
you spit a lil half pint, while i flow the atlantic-
im the one man army, asserting my force-
while your only defense is your cardbord fort-
so you can continue to pretend to be the victim of a hater-
but first you need fans, your about as fake as your bubble gum pager-
yeah your an outsider only cuz no one is intrested-
it wasn't your choice you were jus a lonely kid-
tryin hard as you can to be one of the crowd-
leatherfaced is genuine like the ass of a cow-
juan? i bet your real name is john and i can tell-
you prolly think your mexican cuz you work at taco bell-
your more then likely saving up to buy your own car-
cuz moms is jus a loner and doesn't go very far-
u gonna retaliate with some shit that don't make sense-
tryin to use big words, talkin bout gettin intense-
so u better grab that dictionary and sit your ass down-
and think of something good, cuz im rippin it up now-
but i gotta surprise for you outta respect-
for those who don't know heres your dialect.....
(its still rhymin)
juan talkin football: "Quarterback? no i don't have change"
juan mackin hoes: "girl what you claim cuz that body, it bangs"
juan and a rhyme: "buyin a little tikes mic so i can finally flow, can u dig it?"
juan...here comes your foe: "where,where? its not big paqo.....is it?"
:devious:
why is it you always have the other person bust first?-
to buy you time to respond with an insult or a curse?-
juan mill? you ain rich so why you gotta lie?-
savin up your checks you get from s-s-i?-
you a big balla now, payless shoes to have a night of fun-
then when the partys over take em back to get a refund-
you steal flowers from the cemetary to mack on hos anyway-
and your version of henny is watered down E & J-
you neva hit the chronic, but you pretend to cough-
your gonna be the next sisqo.....the way your fallin off-
cuz its a cold callous world my friend,your jus in the way-
you say your charasmatic, i think your just gay-
you ain got no breezys, more chicken heads then boston market-
you claim your actin wild but you mistaked it for being retarded-
you against me your gonna drown in a panic-
you spit a lil half pint, while i flow the atlantic-
im the one man army, asserting my force-
while your only defense is your cardbord fort-
so you can continue to pretend to be the victim of a hater-
but first you need fans, your about as fake as your bubble gum pager-
yeah your an outsider only cuz no one is intrested-
it wasn't your choice you were jus a lonely kid-
tryin hard as you can to be one of the crowd-
leatherfaced is genuine like the ass of a cow-
juan? i bet your real name is john and i can tell-
you prolly think your mexican cuz you work at taco bell-
your more then likely saving up to buy your own car-
cuz moms is jus a loner and doesn't go very far-
u gonna retaliate with some shit that don't make sense-
tryin to use big words, talkin bout gettin intense-
so u better grab that dictionary and sit your ass down-
and think of something good, cuz im rippin it up now-
but i gotta surprise for you outta respect-
for those who don't know heres your dialect.....
(its still rhymin)
juan talkin football: "Quarterback? no i don't have change"
juan mackin hoes: "girl what you claim cuz that body, it bangs"
juan and a rhyme: "buyin a little tikes mic so i can finally flow, can u dig it?"
juan...here comes your foe: "where,where? its not big paqo.....is it?"
:devious:
Damn right, my rhymes intensified while yours are just immense/
Fits the description, Big but writtin, I think this kid's been hittin inscents/
Spittin liquid like an infant, throwin up some worthless bullshit/
Nothin but nonsense from this newsense, someone get this fool a drool-bib/
I see ya thirstin for victory but I be cursin ya with my hexin/
Show Paqo up in this show down, I'm rockin this HO down like a Texan/
Got the whole town screamin, "Wreck him!" we celebratin A day/
Grab ya weapon cause mine's selected, ya can't spell Abstrakt without the A K/
You a whole three hundred and thirty five pounds of talentless-kid/
And after I'm finished droppin this, you really gonna look browner-than-shit/
I'm poundin my fists and hopin ya just need to shake off some rust/
That aint the case? I'm handin ya toothpaste while singin "another one bites the dust"/
Fits the description, Big but writtin, I think this kid's been hittin inscents/
Spittin liquid like an infant, throwin up some worthless bullshit/
Nothin but nonsense from this newsense, someone get this fool a drool-bib/
I see ya thirstin for victory but I be cursin ya with my hexin/
Show Paqo up in this show down, I'm rockin this HO down like a Texan/
Got the whole town screamin, "Wreck him!" we celebratin A day/
Grab ya weapon cause mine's selected, ya can't spell Abstrakt without the A K/
You a whole three hundred and thirty five pounds of talentless-kid/
And after I'm finished droppin this, you really gonna look browner-than-shit/
I'm poundin my fists and hopin ya just need to shake off some rust/
That aint the case? I'm handin ya toothpaste while singin "another one bites the dust"/
@stealth... that was when i was still begining to grip the concept of a battle. and it seems like all the rhymes i used back then other new folks are using. Im tryin to do somthin diffrent cuz almost everyone flows about killin this and blood brain fragments... Im not knockin it, its jus that its gettin old. My aim is to have my flows intresting.....where i could write 8 paragraphs and folks would read it through and then again.
if im not doing that then i prolly need to re-think my linguistix
if im not doing that then i prolly need to re-think my linguistix