week 4 Heitic vs. Mr. Last

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Jun 25, 2002
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checcin in

fucc it here goes

Not a semi-automatic but i put you out on blast
Like the Mets lose at Shea your rhymes leavin you in Last
My arsenal is set to shoot you down inside of 16 lines
Your retaliation just makes shit worse I've told you many times
I'll see you at the shooting range with holes all thru your chest
Your blood pours out, your body torn because you ca'nt digest
The lyrics that i'm feedin you while you sit with a blank stare
My words speak volumes in this game, your words cannot compare
Not here, not now, not anytime could you get what i've obtained
I'll leave you pissin your pants so scared yo draws already shit stained
Verbally dissectin you so i needs no knife to cut you
Yo bitch can see this plain as day & says it as i'm dumpin you
On yo bacc, face the facts, this battle you cannot win
Peep the stats, your shit is wacc, i'll inform your next of kin
Mr. Last, his time has passed, if it was ever his at all
The plot was hatched, he met his match, closed casket cuz he ai'nt come raw
 

Stealth

Join date: May '98
May 8, 2002
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i liked it. not the best, but definately not the worst. with just a tad bit more, you could be really really good.
 
Jun 25, 2002
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#7
thx again for feedback fellaz, this league is givin me some good practice towards addin tha clownin dimension to my lyrical repertoire...kinda anxious to see what Last brings
 
Apr 25, 2002
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MR. LAST said:
trying one more time
i'm mister Livin Always Strapped Tight hangin out in the srteetlight/
you're Hating Everyone In This Intense Competition,i'm the one you wanna be like/
in the k"nick" of time like allan houston,i met your deadline/
"mr last wins again,heitic never heard again"is tomorrows headline/
i don't know you and i bet you never even heard of yaself/
just by postin against me,you shoulda no-showed,your weak verse just murdered yourself/
i piece together rhymes like quilts,in your sig you look girly like kilts/
lettin you slide this time even though i can't stand you like stilts/
that should be enough,i called your bluff like mount everest/
disconnect your computer,look at vote counts,and see that you'll never win/
 

Deuce

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Jun 12, 2002
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DeuceThatYungPimp

Vote:Last
Reason:This in my eyes was the hardest to hammer a vote on...Last just took it...No real need to explain,But as y'all prolly already up on...Deuce likes long well thought out metaphorical lines of which neither emcee came with...So that being the case I'll vote for Last...But it don't mean I felt it.
2 C's
 
Jun 25, 2002
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#15
any feedbacc is of course welcome, hell i do'nt care if it's "that succed, my eyez are bleeding from reading that crocc of shit", just tryin to get a feel for this shyt