Week 3... Oaklandraiders9 v. Mr. Last

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May 13, 2002
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I guess Ill go now.

Oh no, who is it, Mr. Last or Tragic/
It doesnt matter they both sport the rainbow like that faggot the Trix Rabbit/

If this was baseball, you would be a Shortstop/
A short stop from me to making it to the top/

Battling me is like getting caught stealing/
You ran, fell down hard, and now your thumb is peeling/

You need some hand lotion to put on your thumb/
Oh oh, it ran out as well as your cum, when you and Tragic were done having fun/

Dont start crying now/
Just quit denying how, you and Tragic are the same, so just take a bow/

I'll understand if you dont post now/
All pussies like you get scared somehow/
Its just fun how now we got more beef than a cow/
 
Apr 25, 2002
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i'm pissing on all of oakland like tom brady/
i read your shit,your chances of winning are bout as slim as shady/
you talk big game but bit dvious' rhymes more that tyson/
i am the tennessee titan you're one yard short like kevin dyson/
with your bullshit lines bout me and tragic,what the fuck?/
that shit's been said 69 times so you knowin that it sucks/
like the baseball owners you are really scared to strike/
like boxing referees i'm tellin yo ass be prepared to fight/
but when the challenge was made,like kurt warner you say"i'll pass"/
now you're left like vlade after shaq,layin on your ass/
 
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#7
GOod shit on both. ITs hard to say I might have to read it a couple more times before I vote on it.

THE ROBBER
 
Jun 25, 2002
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#8
vote = Last

The word play was way better, i'm diggin tha sports references as well. The rhyme scheme flowed way better while I was perusing it.
 
Jun 4, 2002
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#9
vote = last

you talk big game but bit dvious' rhymes more that tyson/
i am the tennessee titan you're one yard short like kevin dyson/

i was diggin this line the most!!
 
Apr 25, 2002
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Neither verses were that great but it's plain to see that Mr. Last had the better of the two.

bit dvious' rhymes more that tyson/
I dunno about that line though...sounds like you tryna say Tyson bites Dvious' rhymes but oakland bites them more? I understand that Tyson bites ears, but when did he start biting rhymes? lol