MTOWN CRIMINAL vs CMOKE

lol.......shit was cold my nigga..........

YOU WANNA FOLLOW THE LEADER?/
COME ON AND SWALLOW THE HEATER/
YOU GOT A MOM? ILL GO AND HOLLOW HER BEAVER/

MAYBE TOMORROW ILL MEET HER-AND IF I DO IMA KILL IT/
FUCK A CONDOM IM IN IT-BARE SKINNED SO MAYBE ILL FEEL IT/

that shit was fuccin sicc cuzz.......i felt that shit like a mofucca.......shit had me rollin...lol

ghost

Ask and you Shall Receive....

this ones not about skill? ok ill make it ya will, just pop anotha pill, u take medicine, i stay ill//
u fade back into shade when i bring light kinda like u fade at our fight, cuz unno im out for a kill, everynight//
minipulating ur whole crew i control everything u small time muh fuckas do, that shit u inhailed u bought from me, remember that as u blew, n exhailed as i prevailed over all of u//
Mtown? going where ummmm Mdown u stop when the world turns around u yell at tha top of ya lungs i cant hear a single sound, i frownd when i shoulda smiled all these vile thoughts iv compiled attackin u is so easy ur a child//
A criminal that never been ta jail i been there 6 times all ofum out on bail...i come out wit sic rhymes//
thats what kinda criminal u r, you steal underwear while i jack ya car and find a place to park then i pull out my lighta n spark this while u try to embark this ur the mark, pissed, but u cant even take a shot when iv already missed with one round catch one thats ends all sound, in ya dome, slience, your goin back home//
im prone like a drone on a mission striat with hate pissin on ya name, you jumped in the wrong game no its your whole reputation,SHAME, i create pain with insane brain games beats u down with bats n chains after ur already dead, for pleasure//
your bloods like a tresure shining reminding me of what u said right now its just lyrically dead but u stepped up got knocked down and just fled//
go home u aint sportin red or blue i think ya whole crew should wear pink ur shits like old food im just washin u down the sink//
so go back home, committ anotha crime and admitt to yourself u cant rhyme...ur lucky i even read that shit...it still wasnt worth a second of mine but fuck it i just spit and u still aint shit//


HAHAHAHAHAHAHA just walk away....

<<<<VOTING>>>>

Go ahead and speak on it

no dicc riden here

vote c moke


and every 1 that reads both verses understand y there no other way m clown got ripped

damn........tight verse cmoke.....shit was on point like a muh fucca

overall i gotta vote for mtown........better punchlinez and rhyme scheme........shit had a comical effect......

so,........a locc'd verse cmoke, shit had integrity.......but

vote=mtown

i dont even know pimp...fuckin shut up he just hates ur grade school rhymes just as much as me

cmoke took it to the fullest.. mtown some constructive critisum homie word on word play.. some new vocabulary.. good shit both yaw..

vote: cmoke..

cmoke got this 1