McLouie .V. Chaos

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Sep 16, 2002
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want some feedback? get some repect bitch, take some time to reflect while i flip tha switch//
your just a weak contender, ill bust you up like a wrecked fendor//
im your local lyrical vendor, throw down the white flag and surrendor//
the authorities told you not to leave the flows tendor, but i'm guessin your a repeat offender//
Mc Louie your wack N your thoughts are screwie//
im leavin this short and to on point, dont FUCK with me I'l rip you apart joint by joint//
No need for a ten bar spit because I dont' have to prove myself to you, I'll stay legit//

Well thats All your getting, you wanted a battle i had no time...theres your flow lets see if you can come hard ... stay up homie
 
Oct 28, 2002
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aint a damn thing....nice drop

no one would invest in your stocks despite their-mere-price//
you must be far from Wall Street cause you're no where-near-"NYSE"//(New York Stock Exchange)(nice)
your shit’s smokin, ha ..like dog shit when its cold out//
if you held a free concert that shit wouldn’t get sold out//
I'll bash your skull with my extensively endless verbal offenses//
brain damage left you defenseless, movin slower than cement-mix//
realism and eternal sleep dont apply to me I have no hopes-and-fears//
im killin-spirits, spillin-lyrics like they're o-pen-beers//
I dont have time for punk rappers unless I'm laugh-in-at-em//
your molecular structure only adds up to half-an-at-om//
my checmical organics imbalanced? that's propos-ter-ous//
you couldn't "break me down" if my name was phos-pho-rous//
I laugh at ya rhyme cuz I just spat-a-cross-it, this cat-has-lost-it//
read your text, ya couldnt 'hit a flow' if you were swingin 'bats-at-fauc-ets'//


and thats all you get....peace
 
Jan 22, 2003
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i see chaos as the winner, short lyrics but he served the dinner plate to you mc louie.

good try folks but there is always a next time.
peace out cuz
 
Oct 28, 2002
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dont people have to explain there votes on this site and we got a newbie voting on a battle...

i just saw chaos verse no offense chaos..ur verse had no metas no real punches...it had vocab and wordplay and flowed better then mine...
just pointing out the facts...no beef wit yall just pointing a couple things out...peace