KILO RIDAH vs. Funkzilla

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onewaymuzik

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Oct 21, 2002
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I speak wit telicenetics mind fuck emcees its viscious
Yall out of bounds on a narrow road pleadin for medical assistance
assasinate rappers point blank like wilks booth
if ya wrist blings I jack ya siblings and gold tooth
ya kno im wrong like role modles who puff loop
fuck it I open for class acts piss in the public
I stay broke drink old E while u worry about a budget
u better off gettin down wit mos def if you wanna kick Rawkus
I razor blade ya face adams apple feleted wide open
watch u get depressed hit rocks n die smokin
you'r twisted I rip n flip clicks murderd sadistic
D.C sniper outside clappin ya witness
u rappin fictisious
And u aint even spit it yet
I blaze mortar shells burn ya flesh through the internet
u never been a threat
yo...dogg u been in debt
not money wise but ya flos just aint rich enough
and the text that u layin down just aint sick enough
Nocturnal Life form stealin ya shine on G.p
Ya head is over sized like kids wit down syndrome or E.T
I spit lead projectiles watch ya blood squirt out
and me battlein u aint even a cardiovascular work out
 
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KILO RIDAH

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Oct 25, 2002
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out tha do'\ ima let ya know\ u nuttin but a Punk,-zilla//
u got flo?\i slaughter mc'z like a pro\, call me tha funk killa//
leave u in a slump\like forest gump\when i dump nigga//
grippin tha pump\and bout to get crunk\, freezin ya tikca//
creepin\to leave u leakin\bulletz skeetin\thru ya temple//
seekin\to silence u from speakin\ deletin\ ya mental//
mystic\and futuristic\might describe my twisted\ linguisticz//
i gets cannibalistic\turnin u to a statistic\goin ballistic//
like ramirez\my venemous lyricz\ choke u up when u hear it//
i smear it\u fear it\and in a minute flies your spirit//
aim steady\becuzz im deadly\slicin ya flo'z with a verbal machetti//
sicca than freddy\spittin homicidal medleyz\& starvin for tha fetti//
im gettin tipsy\tha situationz risky\when im off tha whiskey//
u wanna stikc me?\where ya clippz be?\leavin u cursed like a gypsy//
tha kool aid dispenser\with tha infared sensor\makin my flo'z intenser//
gunfire commencer\while u denser\than a two year old bottle of engine cleanser//
call me tha blood spurta\hemoglobin squirta\takin tha shit furtha//
im that hollow tip slug disperser\leave u sleepin good like Serta\91siccness witness punkzillaz lyrical murda//...............


let tha pollz open
 
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BaYzHe||!PoW!||

Sicc OG
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Jun 9, 2002
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aiiight

i gotta give this to funk...


more creative overall... wasn't a bunch of... ima shoot you with the inf-beam-type shit... and the rhyme scheme was more original... not just a bunch of -er and -ic and -it rhymes... those are easy... and he came with more original concepts in his bars... the et line was cool... so was the role model one... overall shit was fresher... kilo... work on rhyme scheme originality... don't use a bunch of words with the same endings... and try and use more creative concepts for your disses... peace and health to both
 
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KILO RIDAH

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Oct 25, 2002
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