well i'm starting to freewrite a lot and would like some feedback on a little something, i'm pretty "shy" when it comes to talking/sharing about myself so this is a milestone for me i suppose hahah but do please be honest...
my mind was dwellin in a deep dark place,
no light but images keep fillin up space,
only thing i could see was the devil's face,
only thing i could feel was a bit of disgrace,
didn't strike fear in the heart of a man,
just contempt cause i thought Life was out of hand,
third eye helped realized it was all apart of the devil's master plan,
learned to love hell now my spirit's flyin in the heavens above this land.
my mind was dwellin in a deep dark place,
no light but images keep fillin up space,
only thing i could see was the devil's face,
only thing i could feel was a bit of disgrace,
didn't strike fear in the heart of a man,
just contempt cause i thought Life was out of hand,
third eye helped realized it was all apart of the devil's master plan,
learned to love hell now my spirit's flyin in the heavens above this land.
