Another verse i recorded last week

I blackout on mics and spit timeless statements
Give me a pen, a notepad and ill display greatness
A lot of new rappers cds are disasters
They need to read hip hop for dummies and study each chapter
I smoke lime green write unpredictable rhyme schemes
My minds clear but im chasing a pipe dream
I been overlooked by a&rs my whole career
Underrated but well respected by all my peers
I been hustling all these years stil tryna get it
Paid a lot of dues and barely received any credit
I need my lettuce cabbage and spinach
And i spit darts until the track is finished
To the cypher my rap style is very essential
Peace to my folks who always saw the potential
Im a spit raps till i gasp for my last breath
And reach for the top till im down to my last stretch





i just can't post the song yet because it's not my song
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i'll post the song once i get the ok. it's not my song. but the song is done and is hella ill imo. thanks for giving feedback though.

lol^ thats a hilarious response in my opinion

if you wanna check out this song it's the first song on my myspace page.

www.myspace.com/gemimac

i go 5th on that thang

hey atleast yall checked it out.

any feedback on the entire song? there are 7 other rappers on it too.