Young Gentleman

i think the photo you chose was the best, but as for the text, sorry, im at a loss for words

i like it..if you were going for a simple text look then i think u got it down clean..

also, the guy's body got cut off in the first picture..or did u do that on purpose

I think the font looks good the way it is.

Just leave it like it is, it fits perfect

As for fonts, I'd play with Trajan and see how that goes. Reason being; Trajan is a strong serif font with conventional features that would lend itself to the strength of that photo (and its angle). Also, I'd move the young to the left side. It's important to follow the standard direction in which people read: left to right. It's calmer on the eye and avoids comprehensive delay. Another suggestion would be to "grimmy up" the title a little, however, perserve its conservativeness; as if to keep it "clean and gangsta". Other than that, you did a great job on matching the subject to the background in both color and character. Good job...

the second picture by itself is real nice you might want to try something with it.

clean and professional I would raise up the text just a little and your fine